Short Story 6

Short Story 6

150 years from now Atoure walks through the abandoned courtyard with her youngest son. He has been attending flight school for nearly all his life and is maturing into quite the free spirit. Although he is the smallest of his class and the bigger kids tease him, he has listened well. Atoure talks slowly with her Caribbean accent, but she is incredibly excited just like her boy, who is “flying” after all. Truly flying!

Comments: 6
  • paintgurl40 June 3, 2011 4:16 am

    flying? interesting…

  • Robert Trujillo/Tres June 3, 2011 4:17 am

    Yuuup! Its part of a huge story I've been developing for years. Im not really sure where its going, just having fun with it!

  • paintgurl40 June 3, 2011 7:16 pm

    i don't have children but i like children books for some reason. i wish you success when you finish the book.

  • Robert Trujillo/Tres June 3, 2011 7:17 pm

    Thank you, not sure when i'll ever finish this story.But i do plan on seeing it to completion!

  • Samax June 19, 2011 4:21 am

    Dude this is nice! How long is it gonna be?

  • Robert Trujillo/Tres June 19, 2011 4:22 am

    I have no idea honestly, just playing with the idea of short story and comics. I may make something with a whole bunch of stories.

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